Deleted Scenes

Here are some scenes and early drafts removed from the final versions of stories.  Deleted scenes, basically, to make myself feel like a filmmaker.  There’s a bit on why some were cut, and where they fitted originally.

Just like commentary on a DVD!

You might be interested.  Or you might not want to look into the sausage machine and see how it all gets made.  It’s really up to you!

But, um, don’t read these if you haven’t read the book or story, though.  Like seriously, it’s basically just paragraphs of spoilers…

Evie’s Job deleted scenes have their own page

Beth and Ethan go to a hotel [from One Plus Two]

Poker night and a couple of Beth monologues [from One Plus Two]

Alternate ending [from Four Together]